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Susan Smitman's avatar

😁—I love B’s drawings, personally

Betty Kano's avatar

What a full treat, short and sweet! If only we had to deal with 3 characters in life.

Thanks!

(I have to agree with Dirk re. Blake's drawings.)

Nina Zolotow's avatar

So glad you liked it! I had fun cramming a whole family history into less than 300 words. (I did use the Blake etching because I thought it was funny for the grandiose father, but I have to say that having seen Blake’s original work at the Tate—the etchings are typically quite small small—I found it extraordinary in real life.)

Bradford Gibson's avatar

Quite the family drama in such a short piece of fiction.❤️

Nina Zolotow's avatar

Thanks! I was actually inspired by hearing some people on local radio complaining about how all the boomers in the Bay Area where a bunch of old hippies who hadn’t planned for their old age. At first I was like, what? But then I decided it would be fun to write about….

dirk van Nouhguys's avatar

I love it! The ever-in-motion connection between planetary and familial. I don't like the drawing though. There s something smarmy-exagerated about Blake's drawings. But maybe that's appropriate.

Nina Zolotow's avatar

Glad you love it! I did think the art work was funny with the story because of the father’s grandiosity in calling himself Sun, like he was the god of the yurt or something, which is something I imagined because I made up that family completely.