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Betty Kano's avatar

Thanks! A surprising story with vivid details.

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Nina Zolotow's avatar

I’m so glad you were surprised by it!

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dirk van Nouhguys's avatar

Tasty

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Sharon Hawkins Leyden's avatar

I love this story and how unexpected it is about the help she needs. Clever and fun and meaningful.

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Nina Zolotow's avatar

Thanks, Sharon!

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Inga Jones Writes Thrillers's avatar

I like how vividly I cna picture this story. Even more impressive that it's all from just one sentence!

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Nina Zolotow's avatar

Thank you! I worked hard on the details

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Susan Smitman's avatar

“Yummy”—could the tall thin white man in a black t-shirt & jeans be the notorious BG?

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Candida's avatar

The story is as delicious as a chocolate cupcake!

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Nina Zolotow's avatar

Glad to hear you think so!

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